Wednesday, October 13, 2010

C4K 3

Esrah
I was assigned to post a comment on  a student named Esrah who is in the 4th grade at Pt England School in Auckland NZ. He decided to write a creative story about skydiving.

My name is May Krasovich. I am a student of Dr.Strange's EDM310 class at the University of South Alabama. My major is Elementary Education I remember when I use to have to write creative stories for school. Those were always the most fun to write. You did a good job with your choice of words and your punctuation was good as well.

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